Too messy and too many things in focus. By the way, according to what i understand, a photojournalistics shot is meant to bring most a lot of story thru just one shot.
I personally feel the pages are way too cluttered and very distracting. I think having many photos just for the sake of many photos and 'value for money' is the wrong approach. But thats my opinion, if the couples like the look then thats cool.