besides the yellow dress with the volleyball shots (#1 and #9) the rest are nice, shutter speed is a tad low tho, the slight hint of motion blur.
I think the location is a bit off. I think the rolling shutter gate spoils the photos. If the background can be less messy and plain, these shots will be very good. You guys should have rented a studio to do this.
The concept is good though.
hahaha.. erm.. i din wan to get the studio wet...else v messy leh..