Wish I could have your job man!
Good perspective. I have no idea what you do for a living but like I said, I wish I could have your job.
Maybe you would want to consider few things though :-
- Share more of what you do. The challenges, expectations, your biggest worry, etc. In this case, you are using your friend as a focal point (in my point view), which is also works but it just lacks of smaller details of what you do. For the last part, I was hoping he would said "The Life of Local General Co-ordinator". If you get it what I mean.
- More LIONS XII match play.
- More interactions between you and other people besides your colleagues.
Overall, good work man!
Maybe you would like to try something different for the next one. Every story has beginning, body and ending. It doesn't have to be that way to make one story.
I am no expert myself. Still, practicing and learning. Just sharing my mistakes and what I learned from others.
