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[warrior babe]

Can't help it, but I feel it can be improved. Please pardon me for this. :embrass:

I am not sure if you have done any sharpening:think:, sharpening could have been higher to reveal the gorgeous skin texture and the contour of the knife.

I have burned a little bit on the left side of the wall to add more interest and contrast to the whole image. The hand holding the knife is a little over-exposed, I burned a little bit.

As there is little interest at the top of the image, I cropped tightly, putting more emphasis on the subject holding the knife.

Other than that, nothing is being changed. The contrast and the black is good enough.

What do you think of the image?

No pardon necessary, I am always happy for anyone to take one of my pics and have a play and see if they can improve it. I like what you have done with it, I think it has made an improvement to the overall look. Thank you

 

[warrior babe]

imho, shadows seem a little on heavy side

Thank you for your feedback. Was trying to get that contrast between the dark and light, which is why maybe the shadows are a little bit heavy and the light is a little bit overexposed.

 

[warrior babe]

very nice concept. but the knife like not "Powerful" enough. if samurai sword den will have a very nice feel i think.

No offence but also need to learn to use liquidfy.

Thank you for your comment. I wanted to use a weapon that you don't often see used, which is why I went for the Kukri. I'm guessing not that many people will recognise it and it has a grittier quality and therefore that kind of adds to the futuristic/urban feel. Also, I plan on doing a few different warrior themed shoots, one of which will be using a Samurai sword for, so another reason why I didn't want to use it in this particular shoot. No offence taken appreciate all feedback.