[Jeffrey] Learning Journey for Landscapes.

[Jeffrey 0ng]

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[SHLEW]

#181.

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Jeff, Like the lion, nice.:thumbsup::thumbsup:

Cheers.
LEW

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

Jeff, Like the lion, nice.:thumbsup::thumbsup:

Cheers.
LEW

Thanks LEW! So glad u like it.

 

[ZerocoolAstra]

#179.

:think: I feel that including the platform doesn't really benefit the composition. Makes it seem more empty somehow. Is it because you were trying to fit both Flyer and MBS into one frame?

#180.

I like the colours in this one! Good job!
Might need to use black-card technique for the 'Lotus' section, otherwise the overexposure is quite distracting.

#181.

errrr... I like the composition, but the colours don't appeal to me... sorry. The cyan (blue) seems too strong.

edit: actually, on 2nd thought I think the composition would benefit from a bit more breathing space to the left... can't remember if there actually IS space to the left. Might be another building?

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

:think: I feel that including the platform doesn't really benefit the composition. Makes it seem more empty somehow. Is it because you were trying to fit both Flyer and MBS into one frame?



I like the colours in this one! Good job!
Might need to use black-card technique for the 'Lotus' section, otherwise the overexposure is quite distracting.



errrr... I like the composition, but the colours don't appeal to me... sorry. The cyan (blue) seems too strong.

edit: actually, on 2nd thought I think the composition would benefit from a bit more breathing space to the left... can't remember if there actually IS space to the left. Might be another building?

Thanks ZCA! For always give me feedback and let me improve. I will noted down all the member feedback and try to apply it all. Thanks everyone! (Black card technique still learning.) Hehe..

 

[The Moving Chair]

Jeffrey, is there a purpose for portrait orientation for 180? The sky and the sea is very blue and not too interesting, so a portrait orientation would include too much of both. Because if u include that much of sky and sea and relatively lesser of your main subject, i'd think the sky and sea needs to be interesting or strong enough to make you want to include so much of both.

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

Jeffrey, is there a purpose for portrait orientation for 180? The sky and the sea is very blue and not too interesting, so a portrait orientation would include too much of both. Because if u include that much of sky and sea and relatively lesser of your main subject, i'd think the sky and sea needs to be interesting or strong enough to make you want to include so much of both.

Hi moving chair, for #180 I actual want to shoot the MBS with the sky and calm water reflect of MBS. But so sad then the wind don't allow me to get the clamp water. So got this shoot. (Hope next time can get what I want.) I really thanks u for give me comment. Let me learn something also.

 

[MGohzxc]

Sunrise on 28/1/11

#175.

Hi bro. Jeffrey, This is a nice shot.. I like the the sunrise and the reflection through the jetty.​

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunrise on 28/1/11

#175.

Hi bro. Jeffrey, This is a nice shot.. I like the the sunrise and the reflection through the jetty.​

So glad u like it. Thanks for away drop by my thread. Have a nice day!​

 

[flyfox]

Sunrise on 28/1/11

#175.

Hmm..this is nice and unique

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

Hmm..this is nice and unique

Thanks bro flyfox for Yr kind words. Hope to meet up soon and shoot together.

 

[mimik07]

errrr... I like the composition, but the colours don't appeal to me... sorry. The cyan (blue) seems too strong.

edit: actually, on 2nd thought I think the composition would benefit from a bit more breathing space to the left... can't remember if there actually IS space to the left. Might be another building?

I second ZCA's opinion on #181. Feel that the framing is pretty left-heavy. I took a shot from a similar position few months back, probably few more steps to the right. :think:

Alternatively I think you can balance your composition here by cropping off the right a little more, but then again it will result in even lesser breathing space. Best solution: shoot again!

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

I second ZCA's opinion on #181. Feel that the framing is pretty left-heavy. I took a shot from a similar position few months back, probably few more steps to the right. :think:

Alternatively I think you can balance your composition here by cropping off the right a little more, but then again it will result in even lesser breathing space. Best solution: shoot again!

Thanks for the comment. I will try again next time.

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

How about this? Is it Better?

#182.

 

[Jeffrey 0ng]

3rd Day Of CNY Sunrise

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After Sunrise

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[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunrise on 6/2/11

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[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunrise on 7/2/11​

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[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunset on 9/2/11

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[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunset on 10/2/11​

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[Jeffrey 0ng]

Sunrise On 11/2/11​

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