I know I wouldn't have done it better... but forgive me for stating it... I seemed to detect a bit of softness in the photo and was it a bit of motion blur? Of course that still take skills that I lacked.
Softness is evident I agree as it was @ full aperture of f4.5 to compensate the lower ISO640 as
it was taken in a room with only available light. Part of my event coverage at that time.