great attempt. Watch your audio- popping here and there and watch the visuals as well. Watch lots and lots of movies. Not only the ones that you like but also the ones you dont. Be open to new cultures and ideas.
Regarding the video, its a bit loose here and there but good attempt nevertheless. I agree that its THE collaborative effort between the actors, DOP, editors and the culmination of this that makes a project a good project.
Congrats on winning competitions. just continue to expand and be flexible and open to new ideas. Don't be like some people here that play down and undermine others. In the end of the day, its you audience that counts. What a movie or video, if nobody is interested to watch and let alone talk about? and remember that If you have something to say, prove it with your OWN work as you have shown as here.
bravo! just keep moving bro!
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