H a z e l @ marina bay

[tonylim]

Great work.
I'd say too many full body shot.
It's works, but composition wise can be improved.
Btw, it's a great series.

Tks for the comment and I appreciate it. I think you are right. This series lack in variety of composition.

#8 my favorites among all.. didnt know 70-200mm can produce such creamy bokeh.

Tks

I think the wardrobe artist needs work, maybe there isnt one. haha.. Her first set of outfit doesnt really suit her. Makes her hips look huge and top too heavy for her frame. I havent shot this model before, but from the second outfit she doesnt look meaty at all, so must be the outfit.

for the second outfit, to me, much better, but you could help to PP away the lines at the tummy area where the jeans shorts begins. (Below the belly button)

Tks for your comment on the outfit and suggestion

 

[tonylim]

The eyes bro. Try to get some lights into her eyes, position her facing the light, use a reflector or bring in some flash.

Otherwise, the colours for 1st set seems to be getting too much contrast, too much black now that it's losing details, but that's me. Everyone will have their take.

U've got them pretty alright. Keep it up.

Tks for the suggestion on lighting. I guess we may have different taste in term of lighting. I like my models to have more shadow on their face

More please....

I will post more if I can...

 

[antoni99]

Nice Model