(Fire)

[kenzi]

It's a nice shot... what I find a little distracting is that there isn't enough space between her feet and the ground, to give this impression of floating....

 

[jeanie]

It's a nice shot... what I find a little distracting is that there isn't enough space between her feet and the ground, to give this impression of floating....

GNS and kenzi,

thanks for input.
actually there's space beneath her legs.just that i cropped a little.
you wont believe the height she jumped.:bigeyes:
really reminds me of michael jordan.:bsmilie:

ok lah...maybe not that high.:bsmilie:

 

[jasongcp]

take my comments as a pinch of salt.. just my personal opinion that i would prefer to shoot from a lower angle and leave a bit more space below..

good try though.. it takes alot of patience for acheiving such shots in studio.. :thumbsup:

For me the model makeup is the weakest link of the theme, if you could get the MUA to throw in stronger and more vibrant makeup, it will put in more strength the your theme.

 

[jeanie]

For me the model makeup is the weakest link of the theme, if you could get the MUA to throw in stronger and more vibrant makeup, it will put in more strength the your theme.

ok got it.but honestly, i prefer it to be more natural.

 

[Shu22]

I enjoyed your photographs! Frankly, I think you have potential.

 

[jeanie]

I enjoyed your photographs! Frankly, I think you have potential.

thanks for the extremely kind comments.

 

[Rashkae]

While I honestly don't quite see the "Fire" theme (other then her body language), I actually like this shot a lot.

 

[jeanie]

While I honestly don't quite see the "Fire" theme (other then her body language), I actually like this shot a lot.

you will 'see' it if she completes this dance right in front of your eyes.believe me on this.

 

[Shu22]

you will 'see' it if she completes this dance right in front of your eyes.believe me on this.

So videography maybe better?

 

[jeanie]

So videography maybe better?

unfortunately, i'm not into that.

and it's better if there's a proper stage for it.

 

[major_tom]

what are you trying to portray?
i assume that since your theme is fire, u wanna portray something related to fire?

the background quite fiery mah.....that's why call 'fire'.
jeanie....I'm impressed; fast learner....

 

[jeanie]

the background quite fiery mah.....that's why call 'fire'.
jeanie....I'm impressed; fast learner....

过奖.请多多指教

 

[jeanie]

fired when she was resting and enjoying the music, and thinking of other poses for me.
constructive comments welcomed.

 

[asterixsg]

fired when she was resting and enjoying the music, and thinking of other poses for me.
constructive comments welcomed.

ooh la la la.
classic :thumbsup:
You are becoming the master of dance photography :bsmilie:
Can I have an autograph please before you turn pro ?

 

[jeanie]

ooh la la la.
classic :thumbsup:
You are becoming the master of dance photography :bsmilie:
Can I have an autograph please before you turn pro ?

aiyo!dun praise me until lidat lah dear!

 

[asterixsg]

no lah. you got a good one there. there's a certain mood in this photograph, very nice.
just wondering. you have such a smooth floor in your room ? you should probably to a series called Reflection

 

[nemesis32]

as mentioned by others.. nice shots.. but BO FIRE LEH!

Rem i told u on your 1st dance thread to be more flowy etc.. you have done that for the last 2 shoot i think and it turns out very well..

For Fire theme, it shd be less flowy but more rugged.. darker, stronger..

 

[jeanie]

no lah. you got a good one there. there's a certain mood in this photograph, very nice.
just wondering. you have such a smooth floor in your room ? you should probably to a series called Reflection

no lah.

2 methods to get the reflection.

1)buy a super big perspex(plastic) from DIY shop.they will include delivery.you need the bigest which is 8 feet by 4 feet IIRC.cost 100+

2)use photoshop to create the effect.

 

[jeanie]

as mentioned by others.. nice shots.. but BO FIRE LEH!

Rem i told u on your 1st dance thread to be more flowy etc.. you have done that for the last 2 shoot i think and it turns out very well..

For Fire theme, it shd be less flowy but more rugged.. darker, stronger..

ok.next shoot, i make sure i put real fire on her dress.:bsmilie:

 

[aloyyolaaloy]

ok.next shoot, i make sure i put real fire on her dress.:bsmilie:

i guess it will be fantastic if she's in a red dress
love the expression :lovegrin: