EXPOSE yourself - CVIII


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To me, quite a pain to shoot and PP this.......will go back again.....:sweat:

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Today light and cloud formation quite gd, bt we were there late becos of my stupid singtel problem.. :angry:

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lunch today...
 

Quite nice!

Tml hope be better..

Newbie, can help critique tis pic? :embrass:

i m thinking of.. room for improvement in terms of composition or placement of key elements.. :)

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waiting to see Andrew's pics :heart:
 

Tml hope be better..

Newbie, can help critique tis pic? :embrass:

i m thinking of.. room for improvement in terms of composition or placement of key elements.. :)

Horizon is straight, but ask yourself why it still look tilted clockwise. :)
 

Personally, I think if without the bottom rock, it may be better... the horizon and couple of rocks before the horizon line makes me look at the whole picture.

But with the rock below, I keep getting drawn there and can't see the whole picture.
 

Horizon is straight, but ask yourself why it still look tilted clockwise. :)

characteristics of the lens i m using? with the ships at the extreme corners weighing the edges down?
 

Personally, I think if without the bottom rock, it may be better... the horizon and couple of rocks before the horizon line makes me look at the whole picture.

But with the rock below, I keep getting drawn there and can't see the whole picture.

Thanks Mike..

i thot of using the rock in the fg as an anchoring element to draw viewer straight into the direction of where the sun sets.. so it doesnt really work here? :embrass:
 

Tml hope be better..

Newbie, can help critique tis pic? :embrass:

i m thinking of.. room for improvement in terms of composition or placement of key elements.. :)

5370319750_6f042e0127_z.jpg

characteristics of the lens i m using? with the ships at the extreme corners weighing the edges down?

Composition. :)

Don't mind i do a quick and dirty PP for comparsion.

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