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[holywing]

if i were you, i wont include in the fried squid ring since the rest of the pics are jap/asian food. try adding in drinks, utensils and etc if they look presentable.

thank you for the comment. that food is nor fried squid ring is onion ring.

 

[paulboh87]

thank you for the comment. that food is nor fried squid ring is onion ring.

no problem, we are all here to learn and to help each other ^^

 

[holywing]

no problem, we are all here to learn and to help each other ^^

Give me comment if need to be improved

 

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[paulboh87]

first off wipe the stain of the chili oil on the plate, push more of the egg to the edge where the camera can see it.

there too much or messy bonito flakes on the tofu.

composition wise the plate which is the main subject is too weak. needs to be full of food or occupy more of the frame. ur angle should go lower and more eye level to the plate.

 

[holywing]

first off wipe the stain of the chili oil on the plate, push more of the egg to the edge where the camera can see it.

there too much or messy bonito flakes on the tofu.

composition wise the plate which is the main subject is too weak. needs to be full of food or occupy more of the frame. ur angle should go lower and more eye level to the plate.

thank you.

 

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