DrunkSlam: Juliana

[Hexlord]

Haha u got me!:cry:
I was pretty upset too when i realised the fingers was cropped off. I will have to be more alert on the little details for my future shoots. Little details does kill an images sometimes.

The pic's actually quite nice, although on a personal preference I would go for a vertical orientation and a slightly slanted angle

 

[steniecoyiuto]

Awesome shot! I actually really like the angle. I feel it works well with the picture...

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[jessejames]

great shot

 

[indaybadiday]

i like the perspective,but somehow i feel there's too much empty space on it.the use of negative space is overpowering your subject.tfs

Thanks Ivan for organising a wonderful Photoshoot on 12th Jan. Its been awhile since my last post in CS. Heres a pic of Juliana, will be posting up more soon.

All C&C from both general public and technical incline viewer are welcome.

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[xllms]

I love the angle and the love the tension created b/w the space and the model...to me the subject isn't the model but can be something else (whatever it is, if u can call this narrative and up to u define it)

i love the exposure with the perspective leading to vagueness but with very faint details and the brilliant sky as the backdrop as a contrast to the vague darkness

i love the contrast between the flowing softness of the model's dress vs the hard & sleek industrial lines of the "wall"...tis contrast in materiality brings out certain appeal of the model

i love the overall mood, but i can only imagine this picture as a fashion spread at the moment...what's your story here, may i ask?

it's a pity the model's fingers are cropped...but did u PS the hair tat streaks to the right? Looks really artificial there

xllms

 

[tony753]

great shot, bro. :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

 

[Drunkslam]

Awesome shot! I actually really like the angle. I feel it works well with the picture...

great shot

Thx i'm glad that u guys like it. =)

i like the perspective,but somehow i feel there's too much empty space on it.the use of negative space is overpowering your subject.tfs

i see wat u mean.
I darken the the bottom right area because there were lots of distraction there, such as cars, road sign n many more :bsmilie:. Those elements will post more distraction if they were nt hidden in the dark. (tats wat i personally feel :embrass

 

[Drunkslam]

I love the angle and the love the tension created b/w the space and the model...to me the subject isn't the model but can be something else (whatever it is, if u can call this narrative and up to u define it)

i love the exposure with the perspective leading to vagueness but with very faint details and the brilliant sky as the backdrop as a contrast to the vague darkness

i love the contrast between the flowing softness of the model's dress vs the hard & sleek industrial lines of the "wall"...tis contrast in materiality brings out certain appeal of the model

i love the overall mood, but i can only imagine this picture as a fashion spread at the moment...what's your story here, may i ask?

it's a pity the model's fingers are cropped...but did u PS the hair tat streaks to the right? Looks really artificial there

xllms

Haha to be honest, i didnt really have a story in mind. Wat i'm aiming for is to get the feel rite. As though the model is looking far away at the setting sun. The hair was natural becos there were a wind machine. But it does look abit artificial in a way partly becos the hair is being blown unevenly. I'm glad tat u pointed that out. As for the finger crop... i can onli blame myself for not being careful :embrass:

 

[Drunkslam]

Heres another pic taken on that day.
All C&Cs are welcome.

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