Comment and critics please. My very first video

[marshall12]

This is my first video.
I would love to get some feedback, so please feel free to comment or critic.
Many thanks!

[video=youtube_share;MaZh5CFceco]http://youtu.be/MaZh5CFceco[/video]

 

[joryan]

Are you promoting the kek? If so, we can't see how it looks like when she was eating it.

 

[RayTravis]

Not bad for a first video.
Anyway you can improve more on how to operate a handheld stabilizer.. and sound of course.
One of the most important element in a video is sound. Do improve on that.

And ur video seems abit shaky and at some points, under exposed. Probably because its compressed..
Justmy 2 cents worth. Hope it helps man..