In my opinion, I think you can crop out the right part (up to the edge of the 2nd pub), as the photo is slightly under-exposed although you have adjusted the curve. People on the right appear to be too dark and details are missing.
In my opinion, I think you can crop out the right part (up to the edge of the 2nd pub), as the photo is slightly under-exposed although you have adjusted the curve. People on the right appear to be too dark and details are missing.
Through this photo, I will like to highlight the street lights and the people are just the secondary subject. So they are under-expose to prevent the 2nd subject from snatching the spot light of the primary subject and the mood. So the people acted as a form of a complimentary.