How does this pic fare? Please C & C.
Many thanks in advance.
prolly make the sweet colours more vivid as there are a variety of colours.
and a minor mistake: you cropped that poor boys head. haha. SSS!
Happy Chinese New Year in Advance!
Hi,
IMO, I find that there's no subject and no composition. Background is also too cluttered and messy and looks like an ordinary snapshot to me.
I'd suggest that you leave the crowd out, leaving your composition only on the sweets or goodies. Include the hand written price "tag" to make it a little more interesting.
Cheers
Picture not sharp and looks like a quick snap pic. Taken with a P&S camera?
I really wanted to show the crowd to give a more festive mood. I agreed that the picture is a bitter clutter with too many different colors. Is there a better way to compose? What would you suggest?
tighter crop, more saturation, and sharper focus, exposure/contrast on one subject - maybe the boy in the red cap ... shld have used a small f stop, f1.8 to f2. I think your f number maybe around 5.6/8 and also you were not deliberate in the selection of your focus point which are the reasons for the comment about it being "snapshotish".