The 1st pic looks like she's digging her nose... i'm sorry but that's my first impression when I see the pic
#03 is adorable...what flash set up did you use?
and just a little improvement: you could probably find a place with more background lights, making your background more colourful.
Hi Forbesg,
Nice shot bro,i like photos #4,#6,#7 & #8.And the #9 low key picture.
Rgds,
cp
i think the ambiance was too dark, i think its better if you push your iso higher btw its a very nice model
nice work...but for #8 you might want to focus on her face instead; look like a slow shutter effect over an unstationary model.