Amanda

[Drunkslam]

Good effort for PP, i wont comment on the colours cos i have colour blind :embrass:
just my 2 cents opinion.

watch your distortion.

Pic 1: My attention was drawn to her tight when i first saw this pic. Probably the framing can be tighter? Cos her face looks very "punch in".

Pic 2: i'm ok with the composition but if u want a tin, probably get a plain and shorter 1.

Pic 3: Again, framing can be tighter. Can show more of her face.

Pic 4: I like her hair being blown by the wind. And it will be nicer if there is some catch light in her eyes.

Overall, not bad for a noobie shoot. Keep on shooting and you will improve. Looking forward to see more of your works soon.

Cheers!

 

[Xevox]

neither can the model be shoot at full body cause the outfit is not properly choosen.

For me I will just look out for the correct exposure and composite to bring out the best of the model with limits.Cant ask for anything more when shoot in group.

Do you mean her skirt is too short to be shot this way? Bro, i must really go for more shoots with you to learn more. The exposure & composure thing really confuse me. I have been cropping like mad to get as close as possible to basic rules like "rules of third". Whenever the model looks into my cam, i will kinda fumble trying to remember the "rule" and when i get nervous, i just hit the shutter and regret later. Lol.. is this normal?

 

[Xevox]

Like the way you put it Cherkel:thumbsup: Onus not only falls on the model but even more so on the photogs themselves.


Xevox, take other's comments with a pinch of salt. Your shots are good considering you are one of the most gentlemanly of all, giving time and way for others photogs during the shoot. Hope to have you at my future shoot bro.

Thank you too for putting me in such a nice group on my first shoot!

 

[charlie]

I don't see anything wrong with #2. Nice legs.

Agreed, perhaps if she reverse the legs' position, this brings about a diff perspective ie left leg up, right leg straight... wanna try that..?