A day with chrystal

[Petf69]

for some reason the her face on #1 looks very distorted......:dunno:

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

15 is nice!

I think 15 is great! The rest seems a little cliche to me.
The crumpled nightie in #1 really spoils it.

i feel bad asking her to be drained in water for this shot but she is fine with the idea.. hehe. the mascara actually start to smerge already.

hmm for the crumpled nightie was a tough decision.. to iron it or not.. thanks for the pointers.

I like some, #2 and #15 are ok. The rest, I have little interest, however, 3 got my ired.

#4, that pair of white gloves is at least 3 sized too big for the model's hand. If the props do not fit, don't use it. It's lack of attention to small details that all too often irrevocably spoiled the final image.

#7 and #8, less is often more. Why did you include the tea candles in the image? First of all, these candles are meant to be put inside a containtainer of some sort. They don't look so nice by themselves, as they are styled in these 2 pictures. Then, if you use candle, why is everything so bright? I had a hard time seeing the candle lights. If I cannot see the candle lights, why use them?

#4 the gloves quite long for her i agree. i got in from spotlight. should had gone for shorter type with lace instead. will pay more attention to the styling part next time.
#7 and 8 candles initially planned for the bathroom shots and with her shirt unbuttoned.. argh...
Nevertheless.. the most constructive comments to date. i will keep in mind those details. thanks.

I like the images

thanks for commenting.

Very pretty model. Good capture of the model.

its a very relaxed shoot in a very relaxed environment. we listened to some music and talked c*ck before shooting. pics naturally look nicer. hee.

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

very interesting. great work.

Like #11 the most as its very unique. For #1, the crumple of the dress is a let down....

Otherwise, everything is fantastic!

The photos give me a very sensual feeling. :thumbsup:

Wow! Very nice! Impressive...

Good Pictures! :thumbsup:

thanks for above comments.. will work harder and improve.

Oh so is her!! Now i know who you talking about. :bsmilie:

aiyo... u know her also ma. :devil:

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

Good Pictures! :thumbsup:

thank you.

I like #11 and #12... Not forgetting the wet look #15 too... Love the mood there...

thanks.. think wet look is more popular.. haha... i only post one :sticktong

Sexay! This series brought your skill to another height bro!

Great work! :thumbsup:

Next time shoot so nice model must jio ok?

hahha... k. scouting time again.. :sweat:

for some reason the her face on #1 looks very distorted......:dunno:

For the distortion part.. she have wide cheekbones.. maybe coz of that?

 

[Loupisk]

Very nice job :thumbsup:and lovely model :heart:!

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

thanks for the comment fellow pungolese

 

[Shirlene Tan]

YoYo Mr Ray! Nice work !:bigeyes: my fav..is the last pic..the one our pretty Crystal kena 'caged' in the toilet ..and true ..the crumpled dress very wasted lah..haha..really fun working with u ..such a dedicated photographer and very kind.. by the way..my name is SHIRLENE TAN..:sticktong not shirley leh.. *smiles*

 

[chilzL]

great series.. but be careful of over-expose on 1st few shots.. :angel:

 

[swishbrade]

A tfcd for a friend. Constructive comments and critics are welcomed.

Credits:
model: chrystal, makeup: janice wong (feather/beads pics), shirley tan(the rest)
feather thrower: fanny

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Great shot:thumbsup:

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

YoYo Mr Ray! Nice work !:bigeyes: my fav..is the last pic..the one our pretty Crystal kena 'caged' in the toilet ..and true ..the crumpled dress very wasted lah..haha..really fun working with u ..such a dedicated photographer and very kind.. by the way..my name is SHIRLENE TAN..:sticktong not shirley leh.. *smiles*

sorri i keep gettting yur name wrong lei. my workplace got shirlene and shirley i also mixed up ;p.. anyway nicce working with u too .. an aspiring makeup artist.

great series.. but be careful of over-expose on 1st few shots.. :angel:

Great shot

thanks for everyone's inputs and comments.. really appreciate all the nickpicks mentioned and i will that note of them in future shoots.. for the rest of the pics just click my link below to check out and also feel free to leave a comment there too.. time to plan for april shoot liao.. :bsmilie: