'60Minutes' A Student Short Action Film

[ley35]

Another post from me to share with you guys
a short film ive directed for. Its an action film a story about a guy who have to go
through a mission contract before he could see his girlfriend again within the time limit, 60 minutes.

Watch till the end of credits! Enjoy!

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[ley35]

Comments and Critiques are welcome. =)

 

[eleveninth]

good effort Just some comments

other than the cheesy dialogue..i don't get "Locate me to her" ??????

using on board mic i guess?

he's not much of a killer is he, if he can miss the shot in the first place.

5:00 he can teleport!!?

5:15. why would the indian guy run? he has a gun. He fires off 2 shots 1m away and misses? super bobo ! lol

6.24. dude comes into his field of vision, don't tell me can't notice the guy.

lastly u need some blood.

 

[wporchard]

Cool film! I really liked the treatment of the whole film from the lighting to the color grading! I think it succeeds in giving us a dirty gritty feel to the whole film. Your choice of shots and camera movements were pretty good as well!
Just do take note of the 180 degree rule during the fight scene as it sometimes jumps the line. Also, maybe you could invest in an external mic or recorder like the Zoom H4N? Even a Zoom H1 would do wonders for your sound!
But other than that, I think it was really well done! Great job!

 

[S2Glow]

spot some spelling error. i wish i could do that type of film i liked this film..

 

[Deunamist]

nice camera work! i especially liked the cuts for the one-on-one melee scenes, but like the others said audio needs improvement. good job guys!

 

[ley35]

good effort Just some comments

other than the cheesy dialogue..i don't get "Locate me to her" ??????

using on board mic i guess?

he's not much of a killer is he, if he can miss the shot in the first place.

5:00 he can teleport!!?

5:15. why would the indian guy run? he has a gun. He fires off 2 shots 1m away and misses? super bobo ! lol

6.24. dude comes into his field of vision, don't tell me can't notice the guy.

lastly u need some blood.

thanks for your comments. Will definitely work on it for future films! =)

 

[ley35]

nice camera work! i especially liked the cuts for the one-on-one melee scenes, but like the others said audio needs improvement. good job guys!

spot some spelling error. i wish i could do that type of film i liked this film..

Cool film! I really liked the treatment of the whole film from the lighting to the color grading! I think it succeeds in giving us a dirty gritty feel to the whole film. Your choice of shots and camera movements were pretty good as well!
Just do take note of the 180 degree rule during the fight scene as it sometimes jumps the line. Also, maybe you could invest in an external mic or recorder like the Zoom H4N? Even a Zoom H1 would do wonders for your sound!
But other than that, I think it was really well done! Great job!

THANKS GUYS!

 

[psalmanazar]

Hi,

Did you use an anamorphic lens or just letter-box it?

Cheers

psalm

 

[ley35]

Letterbox it.