Dude, why not post your base images for us to have a look. Let us have a go at it to see what's wrong.
your white balance seems totally off. I think also that the lens is misted up, probably from just coming out of air-con room?
The sky is overblown. It looks like a single exposure to me, rather than a HDR from bracketed exposures.
Hi i managed to edit it again. With CS2 and Photomatix could i get some comments again?
CS2
-my own noob opinion. This photo seemed slightly underexposed. at least for the front but this time the sky wasn't blown to bits.
Photomatix(obviously)
-as for this, it just seemed like a normal photo(non HDR).
For your info,HDR is high dynamic range images
I see hdr as detailed,enhanced and nicely saturated
If you're looking at "drawing" like and unnatural output
that is another part of the story.I do create some as well
but it all depends on the type of shots.
In your case above,I think you can brightened up a little with the gamma slider
(I don't know about the trial software btw)
Most of the time, post processing comes in to "save the day"
You need to understand the software and it's possibilities
Thanks Yea i kinda just learned about HDR. i am bored with the previous pp... so wanted to go and try HDRs cos they look nice. Thanks anyway. will try to brighten it but i am afraid that it will blow out the sky