nice bokeh and colour, but the focus on #1 should be focus on the centre flower? Just a personal preference. The spider web seem to be distractive in the last picture.
that's why there is not much "bokeh", because you were asking for "bokeh" :sweat: . If that's the case, then you may need to get lower a bit to include more blur background on the other side.
But if you talk about composition without mentioning the bokeh, then this is quite good.
Because the background is so near the subject going to f/2.8 will render parts of the flower blur as well... so u probably can't get very good OOF background unless u shoot from a different angle.
Bokeh refers to OOF areas and the 'quality' of the way the area is OOF. But here in your case, there would be little bokeh as the term is usually used since your OOF areas are really not very defocussed... the problem is that your DOF is not shallow enough and the subject-background distance is really too short...
nice bokeh and colour, but the focus on #1 should be focus on the centre flower? Just a personal preference. The spider web seem to be distractive in the last picture.
Thanks zcf.
pic #1 using auto focus and didn't check after shoot. U r rite, it should focus on centre flower.;p
Yup, i dislike those spider web aswell, but nothing i can do...