Shot in Arab Street


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geoyip

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What do u think of this, comments good bad welcome :cool:

m_girl.jpg
 

AReality said:
underexposed.
also try to whiten her teeth...

Thanks for the feedback :)

Hv pumpup the face quite alot already, the oiginal shot very underexpose. Perhaps due to matrix metering setting on the d70 :( . Should hv use spot i guess?

How can i whiten teeth in PS?

Thanks again for the feedback
 

The post is quite good.

Think you PS the face too much. The face esp the forehead look fake.

Keep on shooting.
 

binbeto said:
The post is quite good.

Think you PS the face too much. The face esp the forehead look fake.

Keep on shooting.

Thanks binbeto :)

Must learn more control when using PS, always tend to overdo :(

Cheers
 

Guess you were trying to surpress a bit of the noise? Doesn't really work as the artifacts are really obvious. How about trying BW?
 

thoa_rs said:
Guess you were trying to surpress a bit of the noise? Doesn't really work as the artifacts are really obvious. How about trying BW?

Not really, i was shooting at iso 400, so noise was not an issue from the oringinal pic :) . Think the noise is due to UMS rather :confused:

I'm not really a BnW guy, but Will give a shot :)
 

i like the colour one....first one....good mood portrayed and good use of DOF....
 

Helped U re-did the foto...

m_girl2.jpg


Edited S-curve to fit exposure.
+20 Red for shadow.
-10 Red for highlight.
"Soft light" white layer opacity 70% for the teeth.
"Softlight" brown layer opacity 50% for the forehead & right cheek.
Sponged the distracting backgrounds.
Dodged the extremely dark red lips.

There ya go... ;)
 

AReality said:
Helped U re-did the foto...

m_girl2.jpg


Edited S-curve to fit exposure.
+20 Red for shadow.
-10 Red for highlight.
"Soft light" white layer opacity 70% for the teeth.
"Softlight" brown layer opacity 50% for the forehead & right cheek.
Sponged the distracting backgrounds.
Dodged the extremely dark red lips.

There ya go... ;)

Thanks AReality, for sharing the tips :)
 

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