I can only comment on the ROM MTV as I only have time to look through that...
1) Too long.
2) When you zoom, do try to be decisive. Do not zoom in and out and in...
3) Panning needs work. Seems tilted. If it is on purpose, my feel is that, you have over used it.
4) Need to work on the transition of scenes...
Just my thoughts. If you find this offensive, let me know and I will remove the comments.
Cheers!
SnapSnap