night photo trial

[vlady]

hi everyone!

just wanna share a trial photo of our hdb area near us

cheers!
C&C are mostly appreciated for improvements.. Good day!

 

[weegk]

Thanks for sharing . . .

in my opinion there is too much tilt of your camera and a bit over exposed from the lights. ;p

i like the cloud, looks like a pheonix.

 

[night86mare]

seems well exposed enough for me.

what i do not like here is the keystone effect - do you think it adds value to the picture - if so, how? if not, why not?

 

[vlady]

Thanks for sharing . . .

in my opinion there is too much tilt of your camera and a bit over exposed from the lights. ;p

i like the cloud, looks like a pheonix.

bwt d clouds.. didnt expect it to b lyk dat...
well i really am working on a lot of things... d tilting and stuff...

thanks bro...

 

[vlady]

seems well exposed enough for me.

what i do not like here is the keystone effect - do you think it adds value to the picture - if so, how? if not, why not?

just noticed now.. dat if i look closely.. it thus have dat keystone effect..
but if i imagine it w/o the clouds dat look lyk a phoenix.. it might just be better...:dunno:

:sweat:

more practice on my compo..:embrass:
thanks for your honest C&C's... hope to post some more and improve!

 

[kitaro9202]

macpherson there right?

 

[vlady]

macpherson there right?

yup! i took d shot opposite d hawker center?
same area? i stay in balam. quite old hdb.. :embrass:

 

[dingaroo]

As the emphasis is on the clouds, I believe the keystone makes the clouds look larger than life, like as if it's coming to life.

That's my feel, though if you want to emphasize on landscape, the keystone should be corrected first.

 

[vlady]

As the emphasis is on the clouds, I believe the keystone makes the clouds look larger than life, like as if it's coming to life.

That's my feel, though if you want to emphasize on landscape, the keystone should be corrected first.

thanks bro.. it really is tilted.. landscape emphasis...:sweat:

ill try to be better.. thanks everyone! greatly appreciate d c&c's.. really is helping me as a newbie..

hope to learn more!:bsmilie: