My videography assignment [MTV-Apologize]

[ivenyong]

hi buddies...this is my final assignment in videography class.
So i try wrote the script, set lighting, casting, and editing myself...
please try to put some comment... thank you

[youtube]q1YgHW0FJrE[/youtube]

 

[brianseah]

looks good.

rather dark, cinematography would say that more close ups will be good.
color wise, slightly dark on some scenes, perhaps you can jack up the contrast slightly

all in all, not bad.

but whats the story ah?

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[jekyll69]

mmm quite interesting

 

[ivenyong]

mm.....actually this looks more like mtv feel .. not much story ..

actually for this project 1 got editing with few version .this is more like mtv feel very hard to know wat it mean..

so far..thx for your advise.. pls look to my new product. thx you http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?p=5427081#post5427081

 

[viix]

Nice work.. for some of the shots, I think it would benefit with less cuts and more slow tracking in shots.. but then the talent will need to be very good at his expression :sweat:

 

[alternus]

It is a rather good clip for a 1st timer! Love the part where you pause the music to let the HP's auto-reply come in. Fits the music perfect. Your flashbacks are also nice (altho a little too confusing by jumping everywhere). Makes the viewer think instead of digesting the video blindly.

I feel that there is a story, just that it is edited into an MTV style. The only confusing part was why the girl went for the other guy. If you had the couple quarrelling in the car in the 1st scene, it will make more sense.

Since there is no dialogue, your cinematography and editing are rather good in being able to tell the story well. E.g. the use of color difference to indicate time difference, flying of papers to indicate accident, etc. I enjoyed your clip.

One fault I find bothering me are the words on the girl's PC.... "happiness guy". It should be "happiest guy" lah...

Haha! Keep it up. Have fun!

 

[kelvintwt]

nice! wish i had the chance to do such stuffs. haha.