My very first video

[jungsangchoe]

let me know hw i can improve my work please?

thanks a lot.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zeKgu_zlHI

 

[kingjen]

Hi, notice there is a long duration at about 0.20 - 0.45 where the near empty train door opens and closes. Like to know what you want to protray here. Overall nice little piece of work.

 

[jungsangchoe]

so i realised that clip was a lil too long eh?
jus wanted to show that door closing and the train moving off.
guess it was poorly executed...
will note that thanks for dropping by

 

[Xinwen]

Overall Good Attempt. I like the direction this montage is going. I have several suggestions:

Transition
It might be a little too fanciful for your choice of song as well as the mood of the video. I recommend just fades maybe cross dissolve, the 3D transitions you're putting it makes the video too fanciful to me.

Framing & Camera Movement
Slightly Jerky and shakey but its pretty minimal. In the future you may want to use a small tripod. I understand that it may be a little attention seeking but it would improve on your quality of work.

Effects
Every shot seemed to have a different effect on it. Try to keep it consistent, have a overall theme and stick to it.

Shots
Some're too lengthy, maybe cut it shorter.
Overall Good Effort!

 

[jungsangchoe]

hey thanks Xinwen for checking my video out.

i do agree with your comments as you are not the first to say these mentioned above.

honestly i was trying out the different transitions thus explaining all the different types u saw in the video.

yes u know i dun hav a tripod hmm new one is gonna blow a lil hole in my pocket (wont mind a sponsor)

my overall effect was nolstogic coz i kinda love the faded colour theme (will consistentensize my work)

yup i gt to look at them videos again n see wads wrong, im sure ur referring to the mrt tt stopped n doors open n close right?

thanks again for dropping by.

Good evening