My 2 cents: It's too complicated. You're trying to show two screens simultaneously, and you'll just confuse people because they don't know what to focus on. Not to mention that you're putting text over your demo reel for the duration of it - they'll focus more on reading the text than the videos, moreso since the text is in the middle of the screen. If you want to show off your diversity, i'd recommend more discreet titles at the bottom of the video MTV style that corresponds with the footage displayed. For instance if you're showing stuff from a corporate video, at the bottom corner put the text: Corporate Video blah blah company. Also remember that reels are about quality rather than quantity. Your reel tries to appear more impressive than it is by showing off the huge volume of stuff that you've done, but you never really give the viewer a chance to actually see what you've done. Imagine a guy coming up to you and saying: you should hire me coz i've done corporatevideosweddingsindustrialvideoslegaldepositoriesmusicvideosshortfilmsfilmfilmsetcetc.
However this would be great as an introduction to a reel - while i was watching it i kept waiting for the 'real reel' to start, but it was just graphic after graphic after graphic, and as a result i never really got a feel for your work itself, apart from the fact that you're good at motion graphics. Lastly, I'm not a big fan of the 'flying ball' transitions you used, but that's just me. I just felt it looked a bit unprofessional and cheesy compared to the standard of your other graphics which were pretty good.
All in all i hope you don't take this negatively, as i'm just offering my opinion of your reel.
