just some comments. its a good try for first timer.
I think u just need to preview more of your videography .
I believe that you when you shoot, you must shoot with a focus in mind.
the make up and sabo is a bit shaking and the pan was too fast
( will be good for mtv )
the framing also play a part, like photography,
you need to know what you want, in and out of frame .
lighting is a bit harsh for the interview, can see the person struggling to open
her eye when she was being interview.
Details are everything.
Just keep on trying and push your limit the next time
Express edit is fun, and you definitely feel the pride or the harvest of your seed
when you see your work being presented during the dinner.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers
Sam