pretty good. It drives the message home. I like the mood of it. In your write up you mentioned that you want the audience to
"see what the character sees and feel his mood and in the end, 60 years of life shortened to his final 60 seconds." Perhaps you could try to omit your explanation and see if the guys here can see what your intention was?
- The initial start could maybe use an L cut? I'd like to hear the screech first on black and then have the visual of the crash. Its just my preference though.
- The flashbacks are kinda too random for anyone to relate to. Too much greenery for an urban city like SG, if SG was the intended audience that is. Maybe some footage of the driver hanging out with friends, family and establish a wider range of locations?
- the first scene of the girl tearing up, it feels more like a breakup rather than a loved one going away to a special place
- Im not sure who the person in the rain is suppose to depict. But good light though

- Lastly, the tagline of 60years | 60seconds. Is the driver 60 years old? It feels like you're targeting 60year old drivers.
Apologies for being too analytical. I could go on but those are really bordering more on styling preferences and that is subjective

anyway, the faux slow mo are done with pics/puppet warp and AE?