Happy kids


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bLight

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something to share, comments welcome. :)

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Okay, in my honest opinion, composition is weak. Only one of them seems happy, and the rest are left in total ambiguity. Try to capture a better moment where you can get the essence of what is happening.
 

you have to crop tighter and concentrate more on their facial expressions....juz my two cents....every1's style is different..
 

You wanted to portray "happy kids" right? So go get really happy faces, their expressions. What you got here is 1 happy kid, 3 others doing something, all sniped from around a bush or a bench (guessing). This picture doesn't do any justice to the caption though, just a passing snap.

//just giving an honest opinion, bLight. Hope you take it positively.//
 

Azure said:
You wanted to portray "happy kids" right? So go get really happy faces, their expressions. What you got here is 1 happy kid, 3 others doing something, all sniped from around a bush or a bench (guessing). This picture doesn't do any justice to the caption though, just a passing snap.

//just giving an honest opinion, bLight. Hope you take it positively.//


No prob, will shot more to improve. :) Thanks all for your comments.
 

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