First ROM experience

[sb00005]

This is my first attempt for a friends's ROM :sweat:

C & C are welcome

www.thesixthavenue.com

 

[william_wwong]

WOW! I like your pictures and the music.

 

[fabianaino]

wow ...that's very good :thumbsup:

 

[khtee]

one comment:
need to put more effort on the slide shows.... but the pics are good.

 

[sb00005]

Thanks guys. Very encouraging.
My mum say why blur blur and dark dark one :cry:

 

[Witness]

i think its a wonderful first attempt.

keep it up

 

[feetless]

truly inspired and impressed with your work
looking foward to more of them

 

[feetless]

one comment:
need to put more effort on the slide shows.... but the pics are good.

hi bro, just curious, could i ask what else can still be done to improve on the slide show?

 

[~Arcanic~]

thats a really good series for a first attempt! my first attempt was quite >.< :bsmilie:

you might want to watch your tilt for some of your pics, noticed you seem to like to tilt your photos quite a bit.

 

[ftang]

Congrats thats a good attempt.

Just one comment. Seems to have too many shots on the make up process in your slideshow. But then again this is just my personnal opinion. Hope you dun mind.

 

[nyxx88]

enjoyed your pictures :thumbsup:

 

[cheerful88]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

 

[Geordie]

Wow... u sure that was a first attempt? :thumbsup:

 

[lincolnchan]

That was really good. I wish i could take like that.

 

[tltan]

cool! nice

 

[lukesky]

Thanks guys. Very encouraging.
My mum say why blur blur and dark dark one :cry:

non-PGs jus don't understand right? They always like everything sharp and bright and subject in the middle of the pic.. :sweat:

 

[grantyale]

I wonder how many people have "Bickham Script Pro Regular" font installed...
Nice pictures.

 

[GaoZi]

non-PGs jus don't understand right? They always like everything sharp and bright and subject in the middle of the pic.. :sweat:

ha. aren't the photos taken for laymen to wow at too?
most of us should be attracted by angles, glowing colours, and a clear focus (THE story told, not DOF etc) in the photos.


can't believe it's a first attempt too. good pictures! like the prep pictures. like your eye for details.

can i suggest 3 things to look at?

1. in quite a few photos, fill flash could be slightly more.
2. slow shutter a little more for more ambient glow
3. go wider. found some shots to be quite tightly cropped

 

[sb00005]

thats a really good series for a first attempt! my first attempt was quite >.< :bsmilie:

you might want to watch your tilt for some of your pics, noticed you seem to like to tilt your photos quite a bit.

Thanks. I reallised that too after I viewed the photos when I came back. I guess I tired too hard in trying to capture "unique" angles. Gets abit dizzy to see a slideshow with so many tilts.:bsmilie:

 

[sb00005]

Congrats thats a good attempt.

Just one comment. Seems to have too many shots on the make up process in your slideshow. But then again this is just my personnal opinion. Hope you dun mind.

Its true. I was too excited at the start and I just kept shooting during the makeup. End up I have quite alot of makeup shots. Will take note of that. thanks