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[nyxx88]

just a some pictures to share. C&C are welcome, hoping to learn & improve, so... slam away :sweat:

#1

#2

 

[eow]

bro ...is it 1st time i saw u post here ?:think: ;p

 

[nyxx88]

Ya... first time :bsmilie:

Just posted & you reply liow... so fast!! :sweat:

 

[eow]

enjoy yr stint here then..ever since the deadman gone...can see lot of people start posting again...

 

[peanutbeer]

Great pictures, great colors, nice skin tone... i love it..;p

only that #1 pose looks uncomfortable for the model.

 

[digisnap]

I like your lighting in #1. Was it edited?

 

[agape01]

Number 2 looks a little dark.

To see how dark or bright it is, use PS to see the values of RGB

 

[nyxx88]

Great pictures, great colors, nice skin tone... i love it..;p

only that #1 pose looks uncomfortable for the model.

Thanks for viewing. It was a shoot where ALL the photogs were newbies :sweat: , so the poor model had to do all the posing herself. It may look uncomfortable, but I think she was OK .

 

[nyxx88]

I like your lighting in #1. Was it edited?

Yes, the pictures where edited. Was playing around with masks & layers in PS that night.

 

[nyxx88]

Number 2 looks a little dark.

To see how dark or bright it is, use PS to see the values of RGB

:bsmilie: You aren't the first to give that feedback & I don't think you would be the last either. I think I overdid the PP that night :sweat:

 

[nyxx88]

Another one

#3

 

[RazrStudio]

1st & 2nd nice tone & texture
however, 1st one - seem like she not that comfortable
2nd one - it's better. either closer or more space would make bigget impact ..
just my 2 cent ..

 

[RoMie]

Nice skin tone, bro. :thumbsup:
Maybe the #1 pic should be crop out to stand more on the subject.

 

[nyxx88]

1st & 2nd nice tone & texture
however, 1st one - seem like she not that comfortable
2nd one - it's better. either closer or more space would make bigget impact ..
just my 2 cent ..

It is noted that many have commented that #1's pose looks uncomfortable, will have to bear that in mind in future.

As for your 2nd comment, what do you mean? Either go in closer or shoot wider is it?

 

[nyxx88]

Nice skin tone, bro. :thumbsup:
Maybe the #1 pic should be crop out to stand more on the subject.

Thanks for viewing, but in this case, it is a matter of preference I suppose :dunno: . It was shot with the intention of having the additional headroom. And there have been mixed opinions about this one -- some like it, some don't :sweat:

 

[nyxx88]

 

[modelinn]

#2

i like these 2, finally see your pics! As for the #1 shot, I think the headroom is ok if the lens choice is not telephoto. Again its personally preference, no right or wrong in art. If many likes a certain style, its called commercial; if very few likes it, its called niche

 

[nyxx88]

Thanx for viewing. Finally got down to processing some backlog pictures. So, decided to post a few. Hoping to get some C&C so that I know what went wrong.

Most of the comments had to do with the post-processing (uneven exposure & overall too dark :sweat: ). Also, #1 looks uncomfortable for the model. If there are more C&C, do let me know.

 

[saifulbahar]

#2 a little dark.. but still love it... good job...

 

[Shodan99]

Ohh.. I like the contrast between the 2 backgrounds! Great eye!:thumbsup: