Cup of My Life
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The cup of my life.
The messiness of my life.
Makes it harder for my thirst to be quenched.
And time is running out.
don't quite get what your text is.
comment: your WB is wrong, unless you purposely made it that way.
i think ts meant the colours to be this way (looks very pp-ed)..
dun get what the captioning meant too..
dun get what the captioning meant too..
i see the clock... i see the bg thats messy....
but why the tilt? too much unneeded space under the exit sign area.
composition doesnt work for me and maybe more dof to get the clock clearer.
but why the tilt? too much unneeded space under the exit sign area.
composition doesnt work for me and maybe more dof to get the clock clearer.
Hey guys,
Thanks so much for all your words.
Was expressing something I felt with that picture. Just wondering if anyone could ride along with it. Haha, sorry for being so random.
Moderators: I will leave the post here for it to die out but if you would like me to remove it, do let me know since it probably doesn't really fit into the "critque" kind of category.
Thanks so much for all your words.
Was expressing something I felt with that picture. Just wondering if anyone could ride along with it. Haha, sorry for being so random.
Moderators: I will leave the post here for it to die out but if you would like me to remove it, do let me know since it probably doesn't really fit into the "critque" kind of category.
i'm fine with your writeup, just that i seem like well, not link... nice words dun compliment inappropriate pictures.
your subject's attention is grabbed by the brighter background. nothing in the picture relates to the lines you wrote.
simple suggestion...
either u write after u take a pic, or u write and think of how u wanna execute.
I rather have the tea cup in color and the background in b&w
just to have more "feel" to it
the tilt is ok tho
just to have more "feel" to it
the tilt is ok tho
Haha. Thanks. Basically every single item in the picture has a meaning. No worries, I think it is just completely random.
P.S. I did not really think. Maybe that's why. I just captured what was there that I felt were speaking to me.
Okay. Let me share a bit more about what the picture meant to me.
Some of our lives are like the coffee cup? (yes it is coffee). Bitter, plain, just a regular cup. All around are the colors, the messiness, the distractions we sometimes have. While we continue to be just a regular cup of coffee. Nothing more. And definitely less. Time passes, and still some of us remain shadowed by the vibrancy of what we yearn to have.
And it's interesting how to everyone, the background is distracting, and the "subject" is boring. Yes, that's how some of us feel.
Or don't we?
Some of our lives are like the coffee cup? (yes it is coffee). Bitter, plain, just a regular cup. All around are the colors, the messiness, the distractions we sometimes have. While we continue to be just a regular cup of coffee. Nothing more. And definitely less. Time passes, and still some of us remain shadowed by the vibrancy of what we yearn to have.
And it's interesting how to everyone, the background is distracting, and the "subject" is boring. Yes, that's how some of us feel.
Or don't we?
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