Sylvia, I am impressed.
I believe that a lot of thought and planning in filming and editing this video.
What I like:
1. Good lead in with title & introduction of the player.
2. Good story telling on Hall 10 volleyball team. In the session on the ento support given by your fan and team mates and team fighting spirit, make me wanted to support your team too.
3. Few transition except for the narration text make the video flow smoothly without distraction.
What I would like to be included:
1. A few scene of the opposite team like how they defend their ground.
2. A few scene of the winning shot
3. A few scene of the fail catch (should I say catch in volleyball term?)
All in all it is a good video with good storyboarding, I look forward to see your future video.