a shoe commercial i made for a friend

[silentmax]

guys i made this shoe commercial for a friend. any comments and or critique is welcomed. anything i should improve on? color grading? pacing?
[video=youtube;KR__8Vj_73s]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KR__8Vj_73s[/video]

 

[psalmanazar]

They will definitely get you if you don't have rights for this song...

 

[Sgdevilzz]

They will definitely get you if you don't have rights for this song...

I think it's just an online blog shop video not TVC. But yes if you use any copyrighted materials to promote your products, you need to get a permission.