A Bland Sunset

[espion]

Arrival: It seems promising upon our arrival at the boardwalk.

Glowing Descend: And so we waited for the sun to descend.

Hopeful: And it looks hopeful.

False Promise: But increasingly looking like a false promise.

 

[espion]

Farewell: And then suddenly the sun departs without a whimper of a farewell.

North: Leaving some remnants of its glory in the North ...

West: ... and West

Entered the Dragon: And suddenly entered the dragon, saying the day is over, and I now rule the night.

 

[PnS]

I like the colour of the last 2. Will it be better to either include more of the branches on the left or totally exclude them?