I think for the last picture, it would be better if the girl in blue looks at her friend.
And I know this is not the photographer's fault but... Where did the obi for the blue kimono go? ;-;
And are the yukata and kimono too long for them? It must be, because they didn't fold it up.
Dispite...
Love picture 1!
But for picture 3... Just a note though... Yukatas are supposed to restrict a woman's movements, so it's straight and bounds the woman's legs.
But for picture 3, I can see that the pink yukata is not worn properly. Her knee is bent, causing the fibric to spread out and make it...