Please read and understand before posting in the Critique Corner.
When You Post:
a) Members are only allowed to post ONE image PER week. This is to allow enough time for critiques to be written...
The reason why this thread was posted in the Critique Corner was to gather CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. And by definition it means: "Constructive criticism is criticism that has a goal of improving some area of another’s person’s work. It refers specifically to the critique of someone...
Ghaz1 - thanks for that. Will definitely keep note on the DOF.
cabbySHE - Somewhere in this forum, there are stickies regarding proper comments/critiques. I suggest you read those first before making any remarks. :nono:
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
composition and is it nice for a food shot
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
to learn more about this area of photography
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
taken indoors...
i do agree that the food looks dry...i forgot to add that this was taken prior to consuming the food that was ordered so no food styling was done.
How can this be avoided if I can't control the food preparation?
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
anything to make the shot better
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
i hope to visually entice people with the food and make them salivate...
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)...
I got this e-quote from John 3:16. Hope it helps! :)
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