Since you are focusing on the EYES.. no comments on the Cropping.
#1 Color seem to be over saturated on her arms.
:thumbsup: well done. esp. over all colors and Sharpness.
YES.. you are right! Ry4503 .
FV Lock will disable Pre-Flash. This is refering to D70 Guide by THom Hogan. :) But the the distance between Flash and subject must not be changed.. :D